Shanghai is my favorite city. I like it because I was born in there, and a lot of my family members and my friends live there. The shopping in Shanghai is cheaper than here, but it’s expensive in China. I have a lot of things to do there, like: shopping, playing, going to my friend’s home… And there’re also a lot of places that are interesting. In Shanghai, people speak the same language as I do. I was there for 13 years! I left there on August, 18th, . And I was there because I was born in there and I lived there.

上海是我最喜歡的城市，我喜歡它因?yàn)槲以谀抢锍錾６椅矣泻芏嗟募胰撕团笥讯甲≡谀抢铩Ｔ谏虾Ｙ?gòu)物要比這里便宜,但是在中國(guó)就昂貴了。我有很多事情要做，比如:購(gòu)物，玩，去我的朋友家里…而且還有很多有趣的地方。在上海,人們和我說(shuō)的是同樣的語(yǔ)言。我在那里呆了13年了!我,8月18號(hào)離開(kāi)了那里。我在那里，是因?yàn)槲以谀抢锍錾易≡谀抢铩?/p>

There’re a lot of people in Shanghai. The people are like me. We all speak the same language. The people in Shanghai are busy and friendly. And Shanghai is also and international city. It’s beautiful and fancy. There’re a lot of tall buildings. That’s why Shanghai is my favorite city. It’s my home city. I love Shanghai!!!

有很多人在上海。像我這樣的人。我們都說(shuō)同樣的語(yǔ)言。上海的人都很忙也很友好。上海也是一個(gè)國(guó)際城市。它美麗和令人向往。那里有很多高大的建筑物。這就是為什么我最喜歡的城市是上海。這是我的家鄉(xiāng)。我愛(ài)上海! ! !

I’d like to go back to Shanghai, but just for a visit. Although Shanghai is good, I’d like to live here because I’d like to study here. I only get a little homework and the air here is flasher than Shanghai. The weather is hot in Shanghai. And the best time of year to go there is spring, because in spring, the weather is cool and warm. But some people asked me:” Why don’t we go there in the fall? The fall is also cool and warm.” I don’t think so, because in Shanghai, the fall is still very hot. I’d like to recommend this place to other because I want more and more people to know and visit my hometown. I hope if I ask my friends:” Have you ever been to Shanghai? Do you like Shanghai?” The answers shouldn’t be:” No, I haven’t been to Shanghai. And I don’t even know anything about Shanghai!” Now, I’ll recommend you to go to visit Shanghai in summer vacation or winter vacation or spring break or every time you’d like, you’d want, because Shanghai is a very nice city. If you go there, you’ll soon like it!

我想回到上海，但只是去拜訪。雖然上海很好，但是我想住在這里，是因?yàn)槲蚁朐谶@里學(xué)習(xí)。我作業(yè)很少，這里的空氣比上海的好。上海的天氣很熱。一年之中最好去上海季節(jié)是春天，因?yàn)樵诖禾炷抢锏奶鞖馐菦鏊蜏嘏摹５行┤藛?wèn)我:“為什么我們不在秋天去那里?秋天也是涼爽和溫暖的”。我不這么認(rèn)為，因?yàn)樵谏虾?秋天仍然很熱。我想推薦這個(gè)地方給其他人，是因?yàn)槲蚁Ｍ絹?lái)越多的人了解和訪問(wèn)我的家鄉(xiāng)。我希望如果我問(wèn)我的朋友們：“你去過(guò)上海嗎?你喜歡上海嗎?“答案不會(huì)是：“不,我沒(méi)有去過(guò)上海。我甚至對(duì)上海一無(wú)所知!“現(xiàn)在，我將推薦你在暑假或者寒假或春假或者是隨時(shí)你想去的時(shí)候去上海，因?yàn)樯虾Ｊ且粋€(gè)非常美麗的城市。如果你去那里，你很快就會(huì)喜歡它!